Friday, November 30, 2007

My Father 4

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Where do I start when there's so much to say? I want to thank yall for your comments to my previous posts. It wasn't easy but I scaled through with God's help. You know it's quite sad when you trust family and neighbors to watch over your little one and they just turn around and do the opposite. My parents were workaholics while I was younger...maybe things would have been different if they worked less. I can't even share my experience with them...i mean here I am opening up when I can't even tell my close friends and family what I've been through.

If they come across this blog and ask me questions, I will not talk about it because I don't think I have what it takes to share all this face to face. I just thank GOD for bringing me this far. Without him, I'm nothing. Please wish me luck with this semester that's coming to an end. I have a huge pile of work and I just need prayers to scale through. Here's the last part to our beautiful but painful story. Enjoy one of Olamild Collections. Click the links below to read the first 3 parts. I HATE MY FATHER I, II, and III.

I HATE MY FATHER IV


//////\\\\\\ 2 months later //////\\\\\\


Wunmi: I wanted to do it but I didn’t do it. I wish I did but I didn’t.


-- : You already know no sinner goes unpunished.


Wunmi: That goes for a sinner not an innocent soul.


-- : How could you have killed your father?

Wunmi: (yelling) He is not my biological father!


Tina: That’s right old woman! Uncle Kenny was her guardian not her father.


-- : What proof do you have?


Tina: When her father died, he handed her over to uncle Kenny to take care of. Uncle Kenny was a trusted family member. I am wunmi’s best friend by the way.


Wunmi: (interferes) You’re family now. You are more than a friend to me. Thanks for being there.


Tina: Don’t mention.


Wunmi: Who are you and what is your name? (facing the strange lady)


-- : I believe you know who I am but you don’t know my name. I am oluwatoyin. I was Kenny’s spouse back then. We met at school on a raining evening. I had left school with the hope of getting home as fast as I could. Unfortunately, it started raining and I had nowhere to hide. I had to stand at the bus stop. Suddenly, a car pulled by. I wasn’t looking to see who it was cause I knew it was a stranger. He offered me a ride, but I refused. He then offered me an umbrella, which I accepted. He gave me his card and stopped a motorbike for me so I could get home on time. I appreciated his generosity. I called him the next day to thank him. As time went by, we got together and started dating.


Wunmi: What a story! Why did do you break up?


Toyin: He cheated. Well lets just say I was more into him then he was to me. I was in love with him but he was in love with someone else. Kenny is a very nice man but he can be cruel.


Tina: (nods head in accordance) You can say that again.


Toyin: But I don’t understand why y’all killed him. He’s been very good to you


Wummi: What do you mean by y’all? He killed himself.


Toyin: Are you saying your father committed suicide?


Wummi: What part of it don’t you get? He is not my father.


Desmond: HE IS YOUR FATHER. (everyone turns around to see who it is.....(desmond was very close to kenny before died. No one knew how they related) Kenny is not only your guardian; he is your biological father.


Wunmi: Not again! Not Again! (attempts to walk away but gets pulled back by Tina)


Desmond: When your father died, he gave you to Kenny. Kenny was in love with your mother but she didn’t even like him. He was upset cause your father had her. He drugged your mom and slept with her. He felt contempt cause he had satisfied his lustful desire with the one he claimed to love. No one was aware of what Kenny did, not even your mom. He threatened to kill me if I said a word. He never intended to impregnate but you were conceived around that time. I've got proof that he is your father. When I told him, he had a strange look on his face.


(Tina flashbacks to the past incidence)


Kenny: Your father took away my love. I was f***ing you to get back at your father until I realized……..(gun clicks)

(Back to the present time)


Tina: (crying) I get it. He stopped when he realized he was your father. He knew the truth before he died.(wunmi fainted)


/~/ /~/ Narration /~/ /~/


She was rushed to the hospital where she laid unconsciously for many days. How could a father betray his own people in such a lascivious way? What do you say to a child in such state? How do you react to a thing of such?


-- 8 days after --(At the hospital)


Taye: Wunmi! Wunmi! Are you okay? (terrified) (facing tina) She opened her eyes, she just did.


Tina: Wunmi! Are you all right?



Wunmi: (moves around slightly) Hi guys

Tina: Don’t say anything. Relax! The doctor said we shouldn’t disturb you anyway. You have been unconscious for 8 days.



Taye: We just thank God you’re alive.

Wunmi: Is it true? (crying and wondering) Is it? Is it? (taye and tina nods head)



Wunmi: (screams) Nooooooooooooooooooooooo…


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Toyin: I’m so sorry it had to end this way. I guess Kenny is not whom I thought he was. I really think he was worth killing after all he put you through. He deserved to be killed but you didn’t kill him....hmmmm (sighs)


Wunmi: I believe I did. I didn’t do it in the physical realm but I did it in all ways. The thought of him sleeping with his own daughter made him kill himself. Bad acts boomerang. He intended to hurt someone else but he hurt himself. Now we know that revenge isn’t the solution to any problem. I’d really like to forgive him but I cant. I killed him in all ways except physically. I did it once and I’ll do it again. I HATE MY FATHER.


The End

NOTE: For all those that have been asking if this is fact or fiction. This particular story is 100% fiction. It was written by me but I believe that it is real. Stuffs like this do happen in real life and we are not even aware of it. This story is just many of the ways innocent women and children get abused... this case is very common everywhere and we need to step up and do something about it. Children are the leaders of tomorrow; they do not deserve to face any kind of abuse. PLEASE SUPPORT THE FIGHT THAT'LL ELIMINATE VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN & CHILDREN.

I WILL BE AWAY UNTIL 2008 (BUSY SCHEDULE FOR DECEMBER). I guess it's Merry Xmas and Happy New Year in Advance. May God bless you and keep you safe in his arms. See ya next year.

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26 comments:

Anonymous said...

WoW!!! Your blog is truly insightful!!!

Joy Akut said...

phewww....fiction!!! sad to think this could be someone elses fact.

where r u off too babe? hope its fun for u tho. have a wonderfully merry xmas and a blessed new year too. God bless

Orientatednaijababe said...

please don't go....thot we wud all be celebrating Christmas and new year together on blogville.....*sad*

I am so happy that ur story is fiction, it is sad to think people go thru this or will go thru something similar....u r so right, nobody deserves to go thru it...so as humans we have to stand up against such evil

Will miss u..

enjoy ur Christmas.....

Writefreak said...

It makes me sad to think some girl child is being molested somewhere right now! Even as a woman you get harassed but it's sad cos most of the children don't even understand what's being done to them..i'll be back to copy the banner, in the meantime, keep up the good work and enjoy your holiday.
Btw, i completed my manuscript o!

Afrobabe said...

awww the end...hope u can get a screen play abi na drama them dey call am, out of this...

see you next year...compliments of the season.

Obinwanne said...

you write so well...perfectly well...

diary of a G said...

what a plot! sad story but creatively written

Jayn Sean said...

Wow!

Anonymous said...

THank you all for your comments

Orientatednaijababe said...

babes, i have updated oh!!!!

TheAfroBeat said...

well written! great blog! welcome to the Afro Beat as well. Just wanted to say how much I admire you for being able to come to terms with the terrible wrongs committed against you as a child. I cannot even feign to imagine what that must have been like for you, but we thank God, you're still standing and walking tall.

Once again, great blog!

ShadeCrown said...

wow.. dis is really good.

Have a lovely xmas

anonymous gal(retired blogger) said...

wow. speechless.

princesa said...

Finally the story ends.
Nice effort dear.

Happy Xmas and Newyear to you in advance.
Missing you already, drop by when you find time.

Unknown said...

I just want to thank you all 4 stopping by. I miss you all and I believe I am doing a good job of keeping in touch with yall. Hope you have a joyous holiday. Cheers

Jayn Sean said...

Olamild..where's an update now????

Jayn Sean said...

Hey babe..i'm tryina post something at your brave journal. The characters don't show. Will keep trying though

But that story about the cracked pot, so sad, but very true. I was forwarded that sometime ago and i spent a lotta time reading that over and over again.

Very nice. Thanx for sharing.

Arewa said...

Good read....MORE MORE MORE.....
ANYWAY I HAE RESURFACED OHHHH and i have updated just as u asked...
hOPE THINGS ARE COOL WITH U. X X XX

Orientatednaijababe said...

abeg make una allow Olamild enjoy herself now....she no fit update now, and she reported u guys to me for incessant harrassment to update...so i am beggin on her behalf....

Olamild, they r just missing you, nd i miss u too.....

Amelia said...

i love your blog, powerful script! keep writing.have you watched Woman thou art losed ? powerful!

diary of a G said...

happy holidays
thanks for stopping by
I see you're still busy
stay safe Olamild aka lovita

desperate lady said...

Hey dear thanks for stopping by my blog, i really appreciate it.
Let me go read part 1, 2 and 3 then i'll be back to leave my comment on it.

cally-waffybabe said...

I came to wish you compliments of the season and bumped into this story. I have read the four parts. I commend women like yourself for raising awareness to this issue. Linda Ikeji is doing something similar on her blog and i admire her courage as well.

Are you also a musician? I liked what i heard but wasn't sure if you were talking about yourself or someone else. Anyway well done.

I wish you a lovely xmas and and new year in advance as well. I hope you have a swell time and may all your dreams be fulfilled.

Hugs
xxx

Anonymous said...

Thank you all for stopping by.
I can be reached on my other blog
www.lovita.bravejournal.com

Miss Opeke said...

I guess d crowd haz moved 2 FB...how long this fever will last...I really have no idea but I still love to blog...and wish I had more time to.
Anyways, how have u been? Thanx so much for letting feel ur presence whenever u stop by my blog...I really apre8.

Love U

Arewa said...

Ola.... i just stopped by to wish u a Merry Christmas & A Happy New Year .....May God Almighty grant all ur wishes for the comming year... Thanks for all the love and support... nuff love x x x