You glanced at me
and I noticed .
I saw you.....
Our eyes met
and I blushed.
I usually look and look away
but in you case,
I looked, I accessed and I smiled because I caught your smile.
It was charming
The smile's so bright
It could light up one's night.
You walked past me
and my jaw dropped in awe.
You're a replica of beauty
Your walk, your style
dazed me.
Deep inside of you,
I saw a meek person.
You're good looking and quiet
Oh what a lovely combination!
Way past the darkness and excitement,
I saw you in your shades.
You walked away
to mingle with friends.
I walked up you,
with a huge smile,
held your hands
and moved to the beat.
You smiled and danced.
You took my hand,
made me spin
so I could see the light
You held me and made me move your way.
I took your hand,
made you spin
so you could see my beauty radiate.
I held you from the back
and made you move my way.
You blushed with a smile
as we danced the night away.
Copyright © 2008 Olamild Entertainments
I wrote this poem on monday at 3:45pm. My weekend was fun-filled and someone in particular sparked my interest.... Could it be love at first sight?
31 comments:
I certainly hope so!!! There is nothing like being in love. Enjoy girl Good poetry too.
i certainly do hope so too. but i honestly do not know why people get hesitant when it gets to the issue of love at first sight. do what you have to do girl but do not take too long thinking.
nice poem. you sure got some skills
Oh./..so sweet. I was with you all the day there...
hmmm...hope so...
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
ooooh, love wantintin!
lol! That's so cute. Okay, more gist, please...
NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...
i know just how u feel girl....nice!
not to be ahead of myself but I thot ur were off limits (ie taken)
lol
"a replica of beauty" eh? gwan my gal
ur the replica of beauty in ur new pic. I like
somebodys in lurvvvv!...well i hope
Before some of you start to attack me and chase me with broom ehh..
eg Diary
I will make some clarifications
This is my blog
and I believe we ought to express ourselves freely on our blogs.
As you all know,
I am in a long distance relationship
but I encountered someone
and I felt I should share what I felt...
`Doesn't hurt to be honest, does it?
Thank you all for your comments
i liked this..:)
i know the feeling :)
Hmm. nice site, nice poem, nice way 2 spend d weekend. but love @ first sight????? babes, i wouldn't bank on it. just enjoy d moment & don't attach more meanings 2 it
oh nice, i sense something great..
love is in the air
p.s__ i dey oh,u
hmnnnnnnnn, ok now!
i checked out the weekend link.....all i can say is hmmmnnnnn for some reason, lol! We feel this way sometimes jare, wetin man fit do .........if u see fine person , how wont we acknowledge, when we'r not blind or insensitive ehn? I dey feel u o my sister!!
Ahhh...love, i am jealous!
Thank u jare chicala
Na true tok be that
Thank you all for the comments
once again
lol vixen
jeez... nice piece... love is a beautiful expression sha...
love o
Wow! That was nice.
love in air?
how u dey?
isnt it fantastic to be in love. but all of a sudden ive lost the feeling. i kept even remember what it's like to be in love anymore sef.
enjoy love darling. very well written too.
olamide
My father once told me this
"Nkan ti o ba fe je ma fi run imu" (hope i got that ? lol)
Something u dont want to eat dont even smell it to avoid temptation
A word is ...............
Love
ok girl, spill, is there abn update on this supposed love at first sight something???lol
i agree with darklacee...... be careful. A spark of interest may turn to a full blown reltionship. Are you ready for the rollercoaster
Anyways enjoy the warmth of the fire but don't touch it unless you are ready to dance :)
These are just oponions, u know what's best for u..
i forgot to say the poem is lovely and beautiful
I didn't know people were still responding to this post.
UPDATE:
It's very unusual for me to meet
someone and just feel like that
so I was very careful
I have something nice going for me
and I don't intend to mess it up.
I looked
I accessed I liked what I saw
and I went for it
but I didn't take it
because it didn't belong to me
LOL darkelcee
Mo ti fi e leyi rumu amo mi o towo o
I don run comot 4 him side.
In case you were curious, I am not starting anything with the guy and I found some interesting facts about him. Let's just say looks are not everything... I knew that before but
I have something great going 4 me
like i typed earlier on
I am not messing it up for this lil weekend "eye me i eye u o"
Eja tutu, I am not ready for a roller coaster. I hate ups and downs so I don comot my eye o
good decision girl! Its good to know ur strengths!
I forgot to say that I loved the poem - have considered writing lyrics yet? I can almost sing your poetry...lol
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